User:Jtrigue/Sacred bundle/Blestrel Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jtrigue


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jtrigue/Sacred_bundle?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sacred bundle

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead sentences are very straight forward and do a great job at explaining exactly what items you are referring to. Although the original article already contains some historical facts, perhaps there are sources you can find in which timelines are provided, or you can find information on some of the oldest bundles discovered.

The content itself is definitely all relevant and you went into great detail about the artifacts, which is great since this is something the current article lacks. I know you mentioned these are often not photographed as they are considered highly personal, but maybe there are depictions somewhere or pictures from a museum in which you can upload to provide a visual aid. I also think you did a great job at remaining neutral as there were no personal opinions or biases included. You discussed the contents of the sacred bundles very matter of factly, leaving little to question.

As for your sources, I believe you had some saved in your bibliography, but the citations are missing within your draft. There is a way to link them and have them cited automatically through the Wiki page/modules. Just be sure that your sources are reliable and to cite whenever you are using someone else's information so your article doesn't get taken down.

The structure of your draft is very clean and organized. This makes it easy to read, and as I mentioned before, it is very straight to the point which is useful for these articles. One thing I may suggest is using the bolded headers Wikipedia gives you to make a clearer distinction in between the topics if you see fit.

Overall, your article is well done, and once you cite your sources, it can be legitimized by Wikipedia and its moderators. If you can continue to search for more information, again such as the first examples, where/when they originated, bundles potentially specific by tribe, colors/patterns, etc., then that may enhance your draft. Great job!