User:Jtruongucr/Liang Bua/Dchungwiki Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Jtruongucr


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Jtruongucr/Liang Bua - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Liang Bua - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead: The writer copied over a paragraph from the original article for his lead. This lead paragraph has an introductory sentence that introduces the topic he will cover. lead covers most topics he will cover in his body but does not have his disagreement section anywhere in it. Lead does not contain any irrelevant material. lead is concise.

Content: content is relevant and up to date.

Tone and Balance: all content I reviewed was neutral. author doesnt seem to try to persuade readers into one position over another.

Sources: all sources are accounted for and correctly reflected. all sources are thorough and current.

Organization: Very well organized, clearly seperated by headers when diving into new topics

Images: Provides clear images that relate to topic. Provides images that are needed to understand the subject matter. Images seem to be non copyright

Overall: Good work. I think it only needs some minor added details and some more images may support your wiki. I see you are still not finished but it is a great start. Keep it up!