User:Jtvndw/Ebers Papyrus/NGrahamMST Peer Review

General info
Jtvndw and Editinglad
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Jtvndw/Ebers Papyrus
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Ebers Papyrus

Evaluate the drafted changes
For Editinglads work, I notice a distinct lack of citations; if all of them are from the listed source, I would recommend having all of the cited from it.

I think JVs work is well done

Overall, I would recommend trying to bring the cures to a point of similar detail as the Migraines cure reads as more detailed than the others and makes the others feel out of place.