User:Jtvndw/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
History of glass

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I really enjoy working with glass. Glass is a vital material for our daily life from windows to food ware to electronic screens, so providing a better understanding of how glass was first made and how we've got to where it is now. My initial impression is that there is not much modern history about glass. I also like how it is split up into different cultures.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

For the lead section it includes a lot of details that would fit better as content and doesn't mention modern history. The content is not really up-to-date since the most recent innovation is from 1960. I think the sections separating by culture and country makes since but some could be improved with data.