User:Ju5st.ali/Cascading Activation/Julesj444 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ju5st.ali


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ju5st.ali/Cascading_Activation?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * There is no information of the current version of the article.

Evaluate the drafted changes
So, after reading what you have so far on your wikipedia page, I like the links you have in the text that reference articles about framing and the author of the study you are looking at. In terms of improvements you could make to your article, I think it would be good to add a concrete definition of what cascading activation is in the lead. Not to mention, I would talk about how cascading activation started. Did it begin with Bush in 2001, or even earlier? It's important to make sure the history on things like these are as concrete as they can be. Also I think a citation you could use is, [1] https://scholarworks.gsu.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=1111&context=communication_diss It talks about apply the cascading model to foreign policy, specifically the 2012 Benghazi attack. I think this could be potentially helpful, but it is up to you. Overall though, I think you have a good start, the article is cited properly and efficiently.