User:Ju5st.ali/Cascading Activation/Mateoa123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ju5st.ali & J146175q

Article: Cascading Activation


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ju5st.ali/Cascading Activation


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Ju5st.ali/Cascading Activation

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Although the lead contains few grammatical errors, it's very informative and straight to the point. The content within the article is organized well through its structure and is quite easy to follow. References used within the article provide clarity on the subject matter and where the authors obtained their information. Suggestions to improve article include revising for grammatical errors as well as providing images. By adding these elements, this will help improve their article tremendously.