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NEPmen Article Evaluation
Adhering to Wikipedia's evaluation guidelines the NEPmen article is both sufficient and insufficient in fulfilling specific attributes. The article is successfully written in a neutral tone abstaining from the usage of bias language, or emphasis of particular arguments. The article is brief and maintains focus, and there is no unnecessary or distracting content within the page. However, the NEPmen article may be too short as information pertaining to relevant concepts or relationships are neglected; for example, the famine of 1922, and its role in the cultivation of the New Economic Plan. Additionally, the article could use the addition of subsequent sections, perhaps a subsection for the Lenin Era, and a section for the Stalin Era; after all, the NEPmen were present during both periods, but influenced socioeconomic dynamics differently for each era. Finally, Paragraph two and three include information are lacking in appropriate citations.

Possible references:
Ball, A., & American Council of Learned Societies. (1990). Russia's last capitalists : The Nepmen, 1921-1929 (1st paperback printing.. ed.). Berkeley: University of California Press.