User:Juc010/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Liao Xiaoyi

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I feel like this page is underdeveloped, and there are a number of sources that can bring additional information about Sheri Liao

Evaluate the article
Lead Section: Doesn't say very much, and is only one sentence long. I feel like there could be more detail and state her title as President of Global Village and more about her in general.

Content: Again, there is very little and now I believe there are much more articles that can bring more detail about her beliefs and ideology. Content is a bit outdated. I hope to add a bit more on her power as a woman if that is relevant to the topic. I feel like I could emphasize more about what she does as an environmentalist.

Tone: Seems neutral overall, but there's not much content to go off of.

Sources: There are only 2 and one was blocked by a firewall for me. There is definitely more information about her that I can search up and add to the page.

Images: There are none, so I would like to add some.

Overall impression: I feel like this article is a good start so far, but can be expanded to another level. I would love to add more detail about Sheri and her role as an environmentalist and a woman. I feel like the article so far mentions important details, but doesn't go into them very deeply.