User:Judystira/OLE2129

The topic i choose is Mobile Legends: Bang Bang which is the first online game on phone that will be included in the next Southeast Asian Games. Mobile Legends is a new game which storms Asia lately. Therefore, based on the statistics in page history, there are currently 454 editors with Wlyn as it first editor on 22 March 2017. The latest edit made was by Carl Trinsan Orense on 15 March 2019. The statistic also shown that most of the editors did a minor changes such as changing the some important dates laid on wikipedia and some grammatical errors.

In conclusion, It is suggested that some adjustment should be made in order to help the readers. For instance, providing the latest information about its appearance in the upcoming e sport to validate and show the readers that it has reach a global level in the game industry. As the second reader, i would put more visual information such as pictures to help readers to asses the information easily.