User:Jugem Jugem 1945/Kandis Leslie Abdul-Aziz/Ewalker05 Peer Review

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GrgNd/Kandis Leslie Abdul-Aziz
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You guys did a great job on your draft. You guys did a great job at having a clear and concise structure that is well organized and makes reading through it and gathering information very easy. I really liked how many reliable sources that you included in your biography. I also liked that almost every sentence included an intext citation at the end. However, I think you should add more citations to the "early life & education" just to further prove that the solidify each statement/fact. I really like that amount of information that you guys provided, and it was organized very well. I also like that your guys stayed away from unneutral words or phrases, rather you wrote from a neutral point of view. I think you should possibly add an "awards/ achievement" section just to make the points stand out more. There is a great lead section that is easy to understand, a clear structure, a neutral tone, and a lot of reliable sources cited. Great job at applying the five elements of a good Wikipedia article.