User:Jugem Jugem 1945/Kat Calvin/Hailey720 Peer Review

General info
(Jugem Jugem 1945) Team Kat Calvin
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:DFloresVVC/Kat Calvin - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Article Strengths

 * Neutral tone
 * Proper spelling and grammar
 * Good use of multiple sources
 * Information is structured nicely

Areas of Opportunity

 * The links at the bottom of the page need improvement when it comes to citing the dates and the web link
 * Focus more on Kat Calvin's work within Black Girls Hack, Michelle in Training, Spread the Vote, and the Project ID Action Fund
 * Maybe create a lead intro heading to present the person's biography

Overall
I believe that team Kat Calvin did a good job at providing concise & neutral information to the sandbox draft/biography that thoroughly explains who she is. I enjoyed reading the information that was provided in the biography and how the information was broken down. The sources provided for the information helped support the team's credibility which made the strength of their article increase positively. The only main improvement that I would suggest for the biography is talking & focusing more on how Kat Calvin became the Co-Founder of these companies as well as what her job is within the companies that she works with, rather than just broadly touching on them!