User:Jujuthebean/Ann Lowe/Iza.pieniadz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

jujuthebean


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jujuthebean/Ann Lowe


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ann Lowe

Evaluate the drafted changes
I don't have too much to add, I agree with the proposed revisions that you're suggesting and looking through the cited sources I think there is a nice variety of articles, books and others.