User:Jules2992/Heritability of autism/Filmfanatic88 Peer Review

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Jules2992
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Jules2992/Heritability of autism
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Heritability of autism

Evaluate the drafted changes
The editor has done a good job with minor revisions to this article. However, there is not a unique contribution (as of writing this review). When I clicked on the article, it mentioned there are many issues like the use of primary sources and original research. This editor could pick a few problematic sources and remove them. They could then write sections using secondary literature. If the editor does this, they will be making corrections that Wikipedia specifically suggested.

At this point, there are no secondary sources added into the article. The bibliography section has one source they may add later, but it does not include a link for viewing. There isn't much to comment on at this stage in their editing process. The editor should look at the specific issues outlined by Wikipedia and use those as a guide to help them improve the article.