User:JulesA27/Yeti crab/Lordenv Peer Review

General info
Sunny Yeo
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Kiwa (crustacean)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Kiwa (crustacean)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think the edits made here are great. The source looks reputable and without any bias. One thing I would however note is that for a short paragraph addition, it is very repetitive. Perhaps some grammatical changes can be made as well as changing or removing the word necessary as it is used twice in the same sentence as well as the phrase "rely solely". Otherwise great job!