User:JulesA27/Yeti crab/LydBo Peer Review

General info
JulesA27
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Kiwa_%28crustacean%29&wvprov=sticky-header

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Lead section is concise and clear, providing readers with a detailed and accurate overview of the Yeti Crab species. That being said, I know you guys worked on the "Behaviors" and "Adaptations" sections so I will provide my feedback on those! Regarding those sections, I think that you did a great job. I did not notice any grammatical errors and the wording seemed to be written in your words and is accurate based on your articles and what we have learned in class. The sections were easy to read, had important and relevant details, and gives the readers a great overview of the Yeti Crab family. My only comment has to do with the labeling of some of the genus/species groups. I noticed that you refer to them in italics with parentheses around the species. I am not sure if that is the accurate way to reference them so you may want to check and make sure it's not just K. puravida (same format at E. coli). Other than that small comment, everything looks great!

Overall, I thought your sections were well-written and concise and I really enjoyed learning more about Yeti Crabs!