User:JulesUAB/Prognosis of schizophrenia/Treyj96 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JulesUAB


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JulesUAB/Prognosis_of_schizophrenia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Prognosis of schizophrenia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, I think this article could benefit from some updates in general, as most of the references predate 2010, but particularly in the treatments and predictors section. I am glad to see that you have made your edits here and what you have added seems applicable. I would also encourage you to look into some alternative treatments for schizophrenia that may commonly be employed with medication and CBT.

I think that this could perhaps benefit from a section devoted to comorbidities, as they are only really mentioned in the violence section. I also think that it may help to add a section addressing suicide, it is mentioned in the lead in, but it is an frequently discussed and yet often misrepresented aspect of schizophrenia that may need further discussion. The article mentions that it is affected by many factors but does not seem to explain them.

The international section seems to have a section regarding prognosis that seems like it doesn't belong there? I found the cultural perspective in this article to be one of its most interesting aspects.

Overall, I like that you have chosen to tackle the treatments section first and I think you made strong additions there, I have just made some suggestions on things that could use further exploration. I look forward to seeing the changes you make to this article!