User:Julesbarr/Water supply and sanitation in Latin America/Kirasbeans Peer Review

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So far, I would agree with all of the proposed edits and additions you would like to make to this article. However, the "strategies to improve services" section only contains one source because it is a summary the recommendations of a brief by the World Bank. Thus, adding more sources would mean the section would probably have to be revamped completely. This would not be a bad thing, but it would be a lot of work. I think you will have to consider: is it acceptable that this section is a summary of a World Bank brief- do these recommendations address all the areas of improvement for water supply and sanitation in Latin America?

Your mention that there is no section on the negative health effects of Latin America's water seems like the spot for a really great addition to this article. There is good information so far about water service, economics, policy, etc., but information on public health would really strengthen this article.