User:Juliad333/Alice in Wonderland (1983 film)/HeidiWashburn Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Juliad333


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Alice in Wonderland (1983 film)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Overall this article is a bit short and I think it could add some more information around the popularity of Alice and Wonderland which is what made it popular enough to go from a book to a play later on to a movie. I like that the entire cast is added but a photo added would also be nice. I think it needs a bit more information about the cast possibly a small blurb about each would be good. More information about where the play was held and people who were behind the scenes cast members and how it got brought to broadway.