User:Juliad333/WWOOF/DanielleMargarite Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Juliad333


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Juliad333/WWOOF?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * WWOOF

Lead
The Lead has been updated to reflect the new additions added by my peer. It clearly describes the main topic of the article in a precise, neutral way. The article's main sections are all briefly touched upon in the introduction, referring to the mission of WWOOF and the motive behind those involved. The Lead is concise and doesn't go into more detail than necessary about any of its topics mentioned in the introduction.