User:Juliad333/WWOOF/Jmcintyre21 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Juliad333


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Juliad333/WWOOF?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * WWOOF

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, the article is good. You effectively and efficiently add to the lead in order to reflect what you added in the body of the article. In addition, the information is supported by the source.

The information is neutral in explaining what WWOOF is and who participates.

The information is supported by an additional reliable secondary source. It is thorough in explaining many different aspects of WWOOF and the source itself is from 2015 which is current enough. All links work!

The added content flows nicely with the rest of the pre-existing article, making it easy to read. No grammar or spelling errors.

No added media.

My only question is why in the fourth paragraph of the lead, begin with "the younger generations," Is there a particular reason? Would this be explained in the history?