User:Juliamarriott/Recycling processes in the textile industry/Laurenpolley Peer Review

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Juliamarriott
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This article provided a summary of the role of the overview of third-party recycling facilities in managing waste materials and promoting environmental sustainability. The article is well-written and does a good job of providing a comprehensive review of the topic. I felt as though the specific topics that they broke the topic down into helped significantly with understanding and clarity of the topic. Some statements made in the article may benefit from more specific citations about where the information was found in order to support credibility. Besides that the citations were very good and detailed in many parts of the article. Another thing that may strengthen this article is adding the potential limits and criticisms that third-party recycling facilities may have. I felt as though you wrote a lot about the benefits and strengths and that was very interesting and good but adding the limitations will add nuance to your article so it’s not for or against one side. There are a few grammatical errors in your paper so make sure to look out for that but other than that I found your paper to be very interesting and you are all doing great work!