User:Julian0217/New York State Department of Transportation/HMW.1995 Peer Review

I am reviewing the work for user Julian0217. User:Julian0217/New York State Department of Transportation
I felt like the new content has not been composed by my peer yet, and that my peer is giving a distasteful opinion of the NYS DOT.

User mentions there are "plans" regarding the MTA but does not annouce what the MTA is, or how it is involved with the New York State Department of Transportation.

I do agree with the concerns there needs to be more of a mention of history in the article however. The information and concerns may somehow relate to the topic.

However, I fail to see any sources of information that my peer intends to add to the article. I feel their draft was mostly brainstorming ideas of what could be done to make the article more biased, since it also alludes to my peer's opinions and makes claims about the article itself.