User:Julianneteres/Jae sae sung oh/Jujuthebean Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Julianneteres


 * Link to draft you're reviewing Jae sae sung oh
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think the current layout reads easily and makes sense. There should be some more development of furniture design and of the bibliography but it's definitely a great start and shows where the article is heading. The draft also does a good job of staying neutral in tone and presenting the facts. It s areally good beginning of an article.