User:Juliaruch/Equal pay for equal work/NBurgos27 Peer Review

For country, just do a heading like the one below when inserting in wiki:

Hungary
Are you planning to do subsections under country? I would recommend to just put all the information listed under the country.

Who is this special Deputy (name)? I think that would be important. I would try to find more information as it seems only one source is used. Are there any current attempts for an government program? Any new information related to the topic? There is a lot of information you can add from the pdf. When I went to search for the citation listed, I found a manuscript for 2011 on the subject and attached the link to the pdf. The document is a manuscript so I would recommend using APA style with a citation like the one linked after this sentence.

My review of work done so far:

Main Legal Provisions '''*I would recommend writing this out like "Hungary in 2011 passed legal provisions regarding....." so on. This would be your topic sentence.'''


 * In 2012, a special Deputy, working under the Labor Department of the Ministry of the National Economy, was appointed to monitor the position of women in the labor market. *Add in the name of the special Deputy, if they have a Wiki article, you can cite them. You can even try to cite the labor department if possible. Perhaps go into the reason why this was done like what issues were preceding this move. What were the outcomes?
 * There is currently no government program that addresses the issue of occupational and sectoral segregation. *Cite the occupational and sectoral segregation with a Wiki article if possible since people might want to look up info on these topics.

Make sure to cite each line that you are taking info after you end the sentence.

Also, fix the 2013 citation listed.

So far, good work. Definitely on the right track. Keep up the good work!