User:Juliay044/2018 World Junior Ice Hockey Championships/BeyondJason7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Juliay044


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * 2018 Hockey Canada controversy and sexual assault


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 2018 Hockey Canada controversy and sexual assault

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The author has drafted and produced an entire article based on the 2018 Hockey Canada sexual Assault scandal. The article is well organized with concise organizational structure of five sections. The sections themselves are neat with a timeline of the meaningful events.

The article is even in tone and all citations are proper.

My only suggestion would be to add a photo or two, maybe from one of the players or people interviewed about the situation.