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Articles I have edited:


 * 1) Great Barrier Reef
 * 2) * I added some notes on the talk page about how the article could be made clearer by doing things such as explaining what runoff, climate change, coral bleaching, and a population outbreak of crown-of-thorn starfish is, and what affects these things are having on the reef.
 * 3) * There were two separate paragraphs that briefly talked coral bleaching and I suggested putting those together, so the article was less choppy.

Article Selection-Cell Division

References:


 * Krylov, M. C., & Golitsin, Y. N. (2010). Cell Division : Theory, Variants, and Degradation. New York: Nova Science Publishers, Inc. Retrieved from http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&AuthType=shib&db=nlebk&AN=340227&site=eds-live&custid=claremount
 * Palm, M. M., Elemans, M., & Beltman, J. B. (2018). Heritable tumor cell division rate heterogeneity induces clonal dominance. Plos Computational Biology, 14(2), e1005954. https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pcbi.1005954
 * Skagia, A., Zografou, C., Venieraki, A., Fasseas, C., Katinakis, P., & Dimou, M. (2017). Functional analysis of the cyclophilin PpiB role in bacterial cell division. Genes To Cells: Devoted To Molecular & Cellular Mechanisms, 22(9), 810–824. https://doi.org/10.1111/gtc.12514

Citation:


 * I added citation 5 to my article

Content Gaps:


 * There is a short paragraph about prokaryotes, but it is only twi sentences, and seems out of place.
 * The sections for anaphase and telophase, are both under three sentences, and seem like they could use more information.

Cell Division Contribution:

Prokaryote:


 * When the prokaryote stage begins it signifies the start of protein production.

Di Giulio, M. (2017). The indefinable term “prokaryote” and the polyphyletic origin of genes. Journal of Genetics, 96(2), 393–397. https://doi.org/10.1007/s12041-017-0775-x

Anaphase:


 * Cdc20 (protein) activates the APC and the anaphase starts, this only happens when all kinetochores are attached to the spindle microtubules

APA (American Psychological Assoc.)

Krylov, M. C., & Golitsin, Y. N. (2010). Cell Division : Theory, Variants, and Degradation. New York: Nova Science Publishers, Inc.

Telophase:


 * A nuclear membrane shows up and surrounds the chromosome setss

APA (American Psychological Assoc.)

Krylov, M. C., & Golitsin, Y. N. (2010). Cell Division : Theory, Variants, and Degradation. New York: Nova Science Publishers, Inc.

Wiki Page as is:

=== Prokaryotes '''(bacteria) undergo a vegetative cell division known as binary fission, where their genetic material is segregated equally into two daughter cells. All cell divisions, regardless of organism, are preceded by a single round of DNA replication. When this stage begins it signifies the start of protein production''' ===

Anaphase[edit]
Anaphase is a very short stage of the cell cycle and occurs after the chromosomes align at the mitotic plate. After the chromosomes line up in the middle of the cell, the spindle fibers will pull them apart. The chromosomes are split apart as the sister chromatids move to opposite sides of the cell.[10]

Telophase[edit]
Telophase is the last stage of the cell cycle. Two cells form around the chromatin at the two poles of the cell. Two nuclear membranes begin to reform and the chromatin begin to unwind.[11

I put the information I found to add the wikipedia page under each topic that needs fixing in bullet points. Then put in the paragraphs they would go in underneath that so my peer reviewer could read what I read and make sure my information will fit with the flow of the page.

Paul Sylvia Peer Review

What you wrote about Anaphase A and B is really well done, and explains them very well. In your content gaps, you wrote about how the section called “Relation to the cell Cycle” is very bare, but you didn’t say what you were thinking of doing about that in your contribution. You did go on to say that you were considering deleting it completely and adding information about metaphase. Is that what you’re going to do? Or are you just going to leave it as is? You only have two citations for what you added. Is that because you only checked two cites, or do those pages have the best information? I’m only asking because you have a lot written, and I would think that you would’ve gotten all of that information for several pages. Also with your cites I don’t think they are cited properly, but I’m pretty sure you know that and will fix them when you put them in your article.

Julie Barber Peer Review

Hey Julie, first of all, your formatting work is fantastic. This page is really well organized.

Prokaryotes: So I'm having trouble discerning what your citation here suggests. It's reference to the evolutionary stage of the prokaryote seems to suggest something that doesn't have much to do with cell division. Perhaps I'm confused, but then I would think that this section needs some more detail.

Anaphase. Your addition here looks great. Nice work.

Telophase: I'm sorry, but it looks as though the current page already has a solid citation for the nuclear membrane reformation at the end of telophase. It says, "Two nuclear membranes begin to reform and the chromatin begin to unwind." Although It looks like you have a nice broad citation for this part. Perhaps you could draw something else out if it related to telophase. For example, the current version says, "Two cells form around the chromatin at the two poles of the cell." So it's describing cytokinesis there without a citation or very much detail. You could probably use your citation for this and add some new info. Or, I'm sure, you could find something else.

Looking Good Julie, I don't think I'm going to be in tomorrow A.M. but feel free to email me if you want. paulsylvia20@gmail.com.

Response

Thank you, this is really helpful. I think now with what we’ve learned about mitosis and meiosis I will be able to add better information because I feel like that class helped me to get a better understanding. The notes have a very clear explanation of what anaphase and telophase are, and what happens during these processes. For the prokaryotes section, I’m going to add information about the way cell division works in prokaryotes apposed to eukaryotes.

Anaphase:


 * Anaphase is a very short stage of the cell cycle and occurs after the chromosomes align at the mitotic plate. After the chromosomes line up in the middle of the cell, the spindle fibers will pull them apart. The chromosomes are split apart as the sister chromatids move to opposite sides of the cell. While the sister chromatids are being pulled apart cell, and plasma gets elongated from non-kinetochore microtubules.

Reece, J. B., Urry, L. A., Cain, M. L. 1., Wasserman, S. A., Minorsky, P. V., Jackson, R., & Campbell, N. A. (2014). Campbell biology (Tenth edition.). Boston: Pearson.

Telophase:


 * Telophase is the last stage of the cell cycle. A cleavage furrow splits the cell in two. These two cells from around the chromatin at the two poles of the cell. Two nuclear membranes begin to reform and the chromatin begins to unwind

APA (American Psychological Assoc.)

Krylov, M. C., & Golitsin, Y. N. (2010). Cell Division : Theory, Variants, and Degradation. New York: Nova Science Publishers, Inc.

Reece, J. B., Urry, L. A., Cain, M. L. 1., Wasserman, S. A., Minorsky, P. V., Jackson, R., & Campbell, N. A. (2014). Campbell biology (Tenth edition.). Boston: Pearson.

I added my contribution into the paragraphs already on the page so when reading you can see how I wanted it to fix in.