User:Juliedo1/Gerrymandering in the United States/Bhorwitch Peer Review

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Julied01
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 * 1) I found an article from October of 2023 that I think could be helpful in relations to your article about racial gerrymandering. https://www.nytimes.com/2023/10/11/us/politics/supreme-court-south-carolina-voting-map.html It's from the new york times. They give in depth information to your article has other links that could be helpful in having more sources for future citations.

2. I also think you should be going more into detail about the racial gerrymandering in areas where there aren't a lot of voters.

Thank you so much for the suggestions. I will be looking into the source as I don't think I've check it out.