User:Juliedo1/Gerrymandering in the United States/Ella-hall1234 Peer Review

Ella Hall Peer Review-

What I saw in the sandbox is off to a good start. I agree that it is super important to include racial discrimination as an effect of gerrymandering. I would have liked to see an example from the actual Wikipedia page of where you would like to put the content instead of just saying what you were going to add (but that's just a personal preference). I liked how you added an explanation after I found that really helpful. From what I saw in your sources, gerrymandering looks like a really interesting topic, so I think there is room for some more information, and also maybe editing some sections on what is already on the Wikipedia page. Overall, I think you are off to a really good start, and I can't wait to see the finished product!

General info
Julie01
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Juliedo1/Gerrymandering in the United States
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gerrymandering in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
- add more information from sources used in bibliography

- the 2000-2010 section on the Wikipedia page is significantly longer then the 2010-2020 section, add more information to that section due to the fact that, at this moment in time that information is more relevant.

Thank you so much for your suggestions. I haven't been adding specific information but I will definitely do that. I also haven't have the chance to actually look into that section but I will now.