User:Juliedo1/Gerrymandering in the United States/Katehaertl Peer Review

Thank you so much for your comments. I haven't really look into history yet but I'll check it out.
 * 1) I dont think they have a draft yet. Their sources look good though and look to be from legit sources.
 * 2) I think what you have there is really solid so far. I really like how you want to talk about discrimination and how it lessons the power of some votes. I think you can really dive into this as I think there is a lot of evidance about this. I think it would be awesome to talk about the history of gerrymandering. Its super interesting and has a lot of rich information.

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