User:Juliedo1/Gerrymandering in the United States/Sophie0100 Peer Review

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I like that you're expanding the effects that gerrymandering has on racial discrimination, that section definitely needs some more information. I found this article Syed, Quratulain, et al. "Gerrymandering and Political Determinants of Health." Population Health Management 25.4 (2022): 568-570. https://www.liebertpub.com/doi/abs/10.1089/pop.2021.0362?journalCode=pop that talks about the effects that gerrymandering has on the health of communities that are impacted by gerrymandering if you want to add that to the article!

Thank you for your suggestion and I'll look into the source.