User:Juliettelm/Skims/Abihello6 Peer Review

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 * User:Juliettelm/Skims - Wikipedia
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Evaluate the drafted changes
The Skims Wiki is very good at link to other relevant pages, like any time Kim Kardashian's name is mentioned it's linked to her Wikipedia page, the article also links words such as "Cultural appropriation", "Team USA", "athleisure" and "Tokyo Olympics". This is able to make the experience for any wiki user much easier so they can find out what the words mean and have an easier time with the article.

Another thing the Wiki Article does well is its opening to subject, it direct and to the point the reader knows automatically what their reading about and what they are about to learn. The opening is also good at talking about what the brand sell and it's "mission statement".

It's also very impressive that you're starting this from scratch, and it already is starting to look professional. The tone is also very impartial, and neutral tone.

Suggestions

I would suggest adding a citation in the "start producing children's clothing"

I would also add a bit more on the History section, it looks like you're still working on it, but you can add a section on how the idea came about. I would also suggest talking about how the company has expanded to retail stores like Nordstrom. Another thing you can talk about to is how the company is diversifying and being body positive with their brand.

Another suggestion is you don't really need Tokyo USA and FENDI in its own section since they both fit into the section of Collaboration, you can have that section be longer and expand from there.

Also, I would add a few photos.

Overall, your wiki article is awesome, and I can't wait to see the finale product.