User:Juliettelm/Skims/Emkajo0216 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Juliettelm


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Juliettelm/Skims?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * I believe this is a new article that they are creating because I am unable to find a link to a previous skims wikipedia page

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi! I think you did a great job in your lead introducing the Skims brand to the reader. You mentioned the essential aspects of the brand and what you would expect from this brand. My one suggestion for your lead would be to add a sentence detailing what the article discusses such as corporate affairs or collaborations. Since this is a relatively new company I would say the information included is very up to date. Obviously as time moves forward there will be more and more information that can be added to the article. The tone sounds enthusiastic towards the success of the brand but also highlights negative aspects such as the original name of the brand- for this reason I would say you have achieved a neutral tone via the content. After looking into your sources it appears you found reliable sources. Regarding this topic it is slightly harder to uncover extremely academic resources but you could keep looking for them. But you did a great job citing and not plagiarizing the sources you utilized. I think it would be beneficial to your article if you added images such as the original line, the fendi collab, or the olympic wear. I believe this is a new article so it does appear that your article meets the notability requirements via the sources you used. Again this is a newer brand so I believe seven sources will capture the extent of the brand today. The structure of your article mirrors other wiki articles which is a great aspect! I think another aspect you could add would be linking this page to other articles on wiki such as Kim Kardashian. Overall I feel like you have a great draft in your sandbox. I left a few suggestions here but congratulations on building a new article for wikipedia.