User:Julyenkaluna/Christopher Marlowe/Nmshin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am reviewing Julyen Kaluna's draft.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Julyenkaluna/Christopher_Marlowe?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Christopher Marlowe

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The user's draft does not contain a lead. A lead would contextualize the draft, which seems to provide a detailed account of the conditions of Marlowe's death. A short overview forecasting the draft's intended location would facilitate revisions and scaffold their research.

The content of the draft has not been cited and there is no bibliography present. I do not have much to say about this as it is surely a matter of compilation, and that they intend to attach citations to the individual sentences when they return to their work.

The draft suggests a dispassionate exploration of an alternative account of Marlowe's death, which has been shrouded in controversy. This is a good contribution, as it is introducing new information developed by people at the time of Marlowe's death.