User:Junkyard-dawg21/Extinction risk from climate change/Ocean552003 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sallupoli


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Junkyard-dawg21/Extinction risk from climate change
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Extinction risk from climate change

Evaluate the drafted changes
The ideas for your draft are good. I like that you are adding a section to the article that does not already exist. It is good you already have an outline (including sources) of the information you want to add. You also have included very good stats. I like the way you are going with the revisions just keep in mind the article is about extinction in which you can add to each "Year" section of which animals have become extinct/endangered due to various factors of climate change and expand on that.

Your sources seem to be reliable and creditable which is a good start!

Overall, I think you are going in the right direction. The next step is to now actually formulate that information into the article.