User:JustJennyLou/Sinistrofulgur sinistrum/Anyaeweber Peer Review

General info
JustJennyLou
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:JustJennyLou/Sinistrofulgur sinistrum
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Sinistrofulgur sinistrum

Evaluate the drafted changes
The reproduction section from the orginal article contains some gramatical errors and it appears that the person who wrote it may not have fully understood the content. There is also no reference for the information. It seems that there have been no proposed changes so far but I would suggest scrapping the section entirely and re-writing it. You can try to include a sentence or two summarizing the original content, but there is a lot more to expand on.