User:JustJennyLou/Sinistrofulgur sinistrum/Rileywalker22 Peer Review

General info
JustJennyLou
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JustJennyLou/Sinistrofulgur_sinistrum?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Sinistrofulgur sinistrum

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The added content is highly relevant to the topic, covering various aspects of the Lightning Whelk's biology and cultural significance.
 * The tone of the article gives an insight about the organism of Sinistrofulgur sinistrum.
 * Content is supported by the correct secondary sources
 * The content is organized into sections corresponding to major aspects of the Lightning Whelk's biology.
 * No grammatical or spelling errors were observed.
 * In comparison to the first version of the article, an addition of sections were added to the Sinistrofulgur sinistrum article to bring a well rounded information that is useful to readers who accesses it.
 * The strengths of the content added are strong with citations included to back up the information.
 * The links of the draft works properly.