User:Just an archaeologist/Maria Plyta/Rubytuesday2023 Peer Review

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Just an archaeologist /
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Just an archaeologist/Maria Plyta
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Maria Plyta

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General notes:

Your writing is super clear and concise, and flows very well! I think you spend an appropriate amount of time covering each topic. I also think the quotes you picked are informative and relevant.

Specific Notes:

Lead: Lead looks good! You provide a good introduction to Plyta and an overview of her significance. My only question is regarding the phrase "necessary space" - do you mean that it was necessary for that space for women's voice in film to be provided, or do you mean that she provided the space that was necessary for women's voices to be amplified? If it is the former, I think you may be a little unbalanced in your tone. I totally agree with you that the space for women is necessary but it may read as praising her work. Perhaps a rewrite of this sentence would add clarity :)

Content: Generally seems relevant and is delivered clearly. Since the article addresses an equity gap, you do a good job of highlighting her significance as a woman in the genre/field and how she improved things for Greek women in film. Two small notes, 1) when you discuss her only known interview, it would be beneficial for you to say in the text where the interview is from (name of the newspaper, magazine, journal, etc.) to give the reader some more context. 2) In the Early Life section - I'm unsure as to what you mean by "VERANDOU"? Not sure if that was meant to be left in there, if so, explanation is needed.

Tone: Your tone is mostly neutral, other than the spot I highlighted in the lead (though this may be a misunderstanding).

Sources: Your sources seem up to date and reliable! However, I see you only have two sources listed in your references. At a glance, this doesn't seem like an adequate amount for the whole article. I don't know the scope of the literature available about Maria, but perhaps you could cross reference your facts with some other sources or add some more information about the specifics of her films?

Overall good job! It was fun to learn about Maria.