User:Justice Ripinga/Alfred Msezane/Tmzyang Peer Review

Your article is very comprehensive in terms of introducing the scientist. However, I believe that the Career section could be expanded to match the portion of early life and education. On the other hand, the references are very supportive and adequate. I suggest using those references more to elaborate on the scientist's career, or even move some of early life and education into the career section.

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