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Janelle Monáe

Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?

Everything is relevant to the article topic.

Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added?

'''There is only one line that mentions her sci-fi emotion picture companion to the Dirty Computer album. There is no other link to a page about the emotion picture, or any analysis of the film. Her new music imagery and style needs to be documented more in this article.'''

What else could be improved?

'''The queerness that is represented in her music is not talked about in her page. The word 'queer' is only used 4 times in the whole page. There is no analysis or description of the sci-fi emotion picture, or why it is referred to it as an 'emotion picture.

Is the article neutral? Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?

The article is heavily baised on her career, with the second largest being her music styles, but it does not discuss Dirty Computer.

Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?

Her queerness is not talked a lot about within her artistry, with connection to her latest album.

How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects?

'''It is B rated. It is a part of WikiProject Biography / Musicians	(Rated B-class), WikiProject LGBT studies / Person 	(Rated B-class), WikiProject R&B and Soul Music	(Rated B-class, Mid-importance), WikiProject Women'''

Mock writes her book is about her personal experience as a trans woman of color. In the author’s note she writes she is aware of her privilege in writing this book and telling her story. Her story is not written with the intent of being representation for all trans women and trans women of color, it is one story out of many. She states in the author’s note, “There is no universal women’s experience”