User:Justinhchan/sandbox

Evaluation
Strengths Weaknesses
 * Historical facts about the background
 * Neutral stance
 * Explains different types of products
 * Has pictures to show certain products
 * Uses news article for source
 * Complex scientific terms

Contribution
I can add a section to talk about the effect of using hair products on people or the culture that comes with it because it would give more insight to the significance of such a topic.

I can change and add to the section "See Also" to make it have more of a meaning. Right now it just looks out of place or useless.

I could add pictures of different products to show more examples for the readers. The positioning of the images seem irrelevant too. I could move the images to different sections to go along witt the text.