User:Justynewpeterson/sandbox

Title of article: "Geodes"

Problems:

This article contains very little information on the subject, And what information it holds is worded strangely. So much that it is confusing to understand. I will be finding and fixing the following list.


 * Rewriting the introduction paragraph
 * Adding location paragraph
 * Touching up colorization paragraph
 * Adding uses for geodes
 * Add pictures of the different colors (Basically more examples)

Sources to use:

https://www.desertusa.com/desert-prospecting/joel-f-hauser-1.html

https://geology.com/articles/geodes

Questions:

What are some uses for Geodes? How big can these rocks get? How much do they sell for? Where would i see them the most?

Why i choose this:

I really like rocks and how they look, how there formed, what uses we have for them. They are very pretty.

Title of Article: "African House Snake"

Problems:

There is very and i mean very little information on this subject and has room for so much improvements, such as


 * Adding a scale color paragraph
 * A habitat
 * Eating habits
 * locations
 * body descriptions

Sources to use:

https://www.reptilecentre.com/info-african-house-snake-care-sheet

http://www.krugerpark.co.za/africa_brown_house_snake.html

Questions:

Do you need a permit to own one? Where can you buy one? How much does their diet cost monthly?

Why i choose this:

I really like animals, and i think snakes are really cute :)

Title of Article: "Central American Snapping Turtle "

Problems:

There is little to no information on this topic, and is lacking basic information like,


 * Colorization
 * Diet
 * Habitat
 * Location
 * Description
 * Pictures

Sources to use:

https://www.arkive.org/central-american-snapping-turtle/chelydra-rossignoni/

https://www.worldlifeexpectancy.com/reptile-life-expectancy-central-american-snapping-turtle

Questions:

Can you own one as a pet? What areas can you find them? are they friendly? Whats their diet?

Why i choose this:

I love turtles, honestly they are my favorite.

Pitch:

I believe that I should work on the article about Geodes, for while i have listed only two sources so far. This topic has the most unrelated sources i could fine. Geodes also seem to be the most underrated rock, even though we see the filling stores and houses, I have meet few people who even knew what a geode was and how they came to be. Honestly i think they are very pretty and the world should have more knowledge on where this beauty truly comes from, and what a geode is and can be used for. I do have other resources of information, i have many friends who collect geodes and can help me find credible sources and information. My first step in fixing this article is redoing the introduction paragraph, many words are misspelled and sentences run off, or make little to no sense. My second step is to go through and add a paragraph of how, where and who discovered them. MY third step will to add another paragraph stating all of the uses for a geode, hopefully this will pull the reader in on learning about geodes.