User:Juwanm/Biodiversity in agriculture/Tnmanning Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Juwanm


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Juwanm/Biodiversity in agriculture
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Juwanm/Biodiversity_in_agriculture?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Biodiversity in agriculture
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Biodiversity in agriculture

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft provides a new section to the Biodiversity in agriculture article. The component gives details of Heterogeneity in biodiversity and the issues that heterogeneity is facing. The leading paragraph describs what the article's topic is about and provides brief introduction to the sections that are present in the article. The clarity of the draft is well presented, clear and concise. There are zero run on sentences and easy to read and understand. The user understands the topic present and effectivly communicates that to the audience.

The draft is thoroughly structured. The paragraph starts off with a good introduction, introducing heterogeneity and how its ones of many issues facing biodiversity. After the introduction you wrote about history which was supported with statistics. Overall the paragraph is well organized and not to complex for the readers. The draft is neutral throughout the paragraphs, it provides a neutral point of view for the readers about heterogeneity. There is no bias towards to facts presented.

The draft contains a outstanding amount of sources, eliminating any bias towards the subject. Each sources is working and a reliable source that reflect the topic written. Another source that can be potential used for your draft is:

Source: Kolasa, J., Rollo, C.D. (1991). Introduction: The Heterogeneity of Heterogeneity: A Glossary. In: Kolasa, J., Pickett, S.T.A. (eds) Ecological Heterogeneity. Ecological Studies, vol 86. Springer, New York, NY. https://doi.org/10.1007/978-1-4612-3062-5_1

This book is a good source to expand ur knowledge on heterogeneity, and helps understand more about heterogeneity concept. Overall, your draft is well put together and shows that you have a great understanding of the topic. Many great qualities about your draft but an improvement that can be done is having a conclusion. You have a great introduction and body paragraph, a conclusion will end off your section. The draft is perfect when it comes to grammar and has little to no grammar issues.