User:Jvb26/Childhood chronic illness/Ella.olgin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jvb26


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jvb26/Childhood_chronic_illness?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Childhood chronic illness

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The content added was very relevant to the topic and was up-to-date. It was neutral and did not argue for one view over another. A few of the sources cited were a little old, but they seemed to all be good and reliable sources. The content was well written and concise, and there were no grammar errors except for in the first sentence (I believe educator should be plural rather than singular). Overall, the changes made to the article were clear, relevant, and unbiased.