User:Jvysonn/Michael G. Hadfield/Kmalco13 Peer Review

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Jvysonn


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Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is clear and concise. I would maybe change "he is well known for..." to "his main focus of research has been on.." or something like that.

The article body is great and has lots of good detail. I like the note about the snail called George. I would switch the lines about his 1989 and 1972 projects just so everything is in chronological order.

Perhaps add an image of the species named after him as well for some added interest.

Lots of good references. Great job!