User:Jw6740/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Electronic business

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
The reason I chose this article is that it is related to the topic of research paper I am working on. Besides, with the rapid increasing number of internet users, the e-commerce has considerably influences the business structure of the retailing industry. In the present society, the electronic business forms one of the most important part in our daily live. Therefore, I think it is necessary to have a deeper understanding of how it works and the affects it has in our lives.

Evaluate the article
This article does have a clear topic and the content are all related to the topic which is the electronic business. Beside, the author does write the article in the neutral tone which states both the disadvantages and benefits of the businesses objectively.

But the article does have something to improve. First of all, it needs further references especially when explaining the history of the electronic business. Besides, the content of the article is can be improved as well. To be specific, it tend to talk too much about the concerns of the e-business and also relied too much on the security issues. Besides, the section of concerns and the disadvantages can put in the same part. To make the article up-to-date, author can add the influences that the covid-19 bring to the e-business. Lastly, the article is lack of the images to better explain what the electronic businesses is. The article still need to be improved.