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Begin Editing
I am about to start editing today.Jwall97 (talk) 17:08, 21 October 2015 (UTC)

Editing Ben Abraham Article
I edited the Ben Abraham article. I changed the sentence structure of the first two paragraphs. It didn't sound as though it had a flow, so i edited it.

Jwall97 (talk) 16:56, 23 October 2015 (UTC)

Editing Gabriel Knight: Sins of the Father
The article Gabriel Knight: Sins of the Father was a good article explaining the game. In the Game play section differentiating the "TALK" and "ASK" features, the paragraph was not flowing well. The writer was going back and forth between the two so I helped make the distinction between the two features more clear. I also corrected some of his spelling. He missed spelled the following words: Mosley, game play, realize, and fulfill. These were all minor changes.

Jwall97 (talk) 21:55, 10 November 2015 (UTC)

Lead Section for 1965 Philadelphia Eagles season
I created a lead for the Philadelphia Eagles's season in 1965. I gave an overview of how the wins and losses for their season and added the coach and owner of the team for that season, as well as the results for how they played for that season.Jwall97 (talk) 23:58, 10 November 2015 (UTC)

Citations for Hluhluwe
These are the references citations that I had added to teh "Hluhluwe" Article:

Hackel, Jeffrey D. "Conservation Attitudes in Southern Africa: A Comparison between KwaZulu and Swaziland." Human Ecology 18.2 (1990): 203-09. JSTOR. Web. 11 Nov. 2015.

Samimi, Cyrus. "Biomass Estimation Using Landsat-TM and -ETM . Towards a Regional Model for Southern Africa?" GeoJournal 59.3, Systems Modelling Across Geography's Interface (2004): 177-87. JSTOR. Web. 11 Nov. 2015.

Waldram, Matthew S. "Ecological Engineering by a Mega-Grazer: White Rhino Impacts on a South African Savanna." Ecosystems 11.1 (2008): 101-12. JSTOR. Web. 11 Nov. 2015. Lundén, Bengt. "Survey Mapping of Bedrock Outcrops a Comparative Study Using Data from Landsat TM and SPOT HRV." Geografiska Annaler. Series A Physical Geography.Vol. 70, No. 3 (1988): 125-33.JSTOR. Web.

Pearce, Douglas G. "Geography, Tourism and Recreation in the Antipodes." GeoJournal 9.1, Geography of Tourism and Leisure (1984): 91-95. JSTOR. Web. 11 Nov. 2015.

11 Nov. 2015. Jwall97 (talk) 17:10, 11 November 2015 (UTC)