User:Jwbeyer/Siboglinidae oligobrachia/Benthicben21 Peer Review

General Info:

- Add relavent Links (for all paragraphs)

- Bold "Siboglinidae oligobrachia" (for all paragraphs)

- Good in-text citations

Endosymbiotic Bacteria:

- Well worded, looks good

Hemoglobin Production:

- Looks good, but maybe this paragraph could either be expanded or stuffed into another

Development:

- Spelling error (development -> developed)

References/Biblio:

- Well done, just make sure they are all on both references and the bibliography

General info

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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)