User:Jwheatley01/Calorie restriction

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Article Draft
Outline of the Article (These will not be the final headings for the article)

Introduction to Calorie Restriction

 * Edit the grammar


 * Add more information
 * Remove information that is opinionated or may sound like the previous author is giving medical advice
 * Remove unnecessary explanations

The History of Calorie Restriction

 * Add this section to the article (it is needed before jumping into "Recommendations" (this was already there) and other information.
 * Gives more information on the background of Calorie Restriction

Calorie Restriction: Research

 * Reorganize the page. Instead of Health effects first, lets put research then the effects calorie restriction after.
 * The flow of each section under research is off. Feels like the results are being thrown at you.
 * Check the grammar add more evidence with citations.

Calories Restriction: Health Effects

 * Now that the research has been discussed, go more into detail of the effects it has on humans and other species.
 * There is not enough information within the side effect category.
 * I am not liking the recommendations section.The title "recommendations" seems like it the previous author is trying to give medical advice. Try to change it.
 * Needs more information and grammar check