User:Jwiggler/Semipermeable membrane/GoldenIsland2124 Peer Review

General info
Jwiggler
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Jwiggler/Semipermeable membrane
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Semipermeable membrane
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Semipermeable membrane

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content:

I like your addition on dialysis tubing, taking it from a simple line in the original Wikipedia page into a whole section was quite the extensive change.

Tone and Balance:

Your tone seemed neutral and professional

Sources and References:

Sources look professional and trustworthy.

Organization:

Looking at the section on biological and artificial membranes I was wondering if the sections on osmotic stress and reverse osmosis belong in these sections. It seems to be that these should be about types of membranes and these discussions on osmosis should be together in their own separate sections.