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The article for Magnitogorsk contains many elements that can be improved. At the top of the article, there is a notice that alerts readers to the article's lack of adequate citations. It is evident from the three "citation needed" notices within the article that some sources must be verified. Furthermore, the article's use of active voice in the present tense in the sentence "With the depletion of the substantial local iron-ore reserves, Magnitogorsk has to import raw materials from Sokolvsko-Sarbaisky deposit in northern Kazakhstan" shows that this article requires further editing. Some of the sources that the article does provide, however, are reliable primary sources that contain accurate information. The article contains a variety of sections, though many lack real substance.